19 April 2009

@#@# WTF!! @#$$@$

Pic. Courtesy: Internet


Look at me...
Look what I've become...
An optimist...
or an self-satisfied scum...

Smiling...
with blank cheque in my hand...
Smiling though....
knowing..that i'm sinking in quicksand....

Hello...can anyone hear me???
Am i audible???
Pull me up if you please...
dont let me rot in hell..

Look at the sky once...
Check out the twinkling of the stars...
Funny...eh!!?? Its just a ball of gas...
This time...I've gone...a bit too far...

I am sorry...this one is not so good...
As if... I write nice stuff
Please..please...tell me..I write nice...
I'd love to see you bluff!!!!

5 whispers that i heard....:

Little Girl Lost said...

You write nice... no bluff :)
very noir. fits my mood perfectly...

Aleya said...

You are a space scientist...or a poet????? tell me the truth???

Little Girl Lost said...

akash, the background colour and the colour of your text makes your poem almost invisible.
while this is very surreal, its also difficult to read.
please do something :)

Akash said...

hey...thanks for the advice :)...and aleya...i'm both.... ;)

Little Girl Lost said...

akash, come read my story...