20 March 2010

The Delerium Of Loop

Another of my favourite dark poem in the shell of nonsense!!!!

Please click on the picture, i made the poem in a pic format!!!!

5 whispers that i heard....:

dghfj said...

nice :) it somehow reminded me off lewis carroll's "walrus and the carpenter"...

Akash said...

@sopner feriwala...even i found the similarity...but it was after i had finished my poem...maybe unknowingly...lewis carroll's walrus and the carpenter indeed made an influence!!!!

infact...its really hard to write non-sense without the lewis carroll ro sukumar ray effect!!!! :-)

Trisha said...

nice and dark..we tend to forcefully shut down voices we don't want to hear, listen or understand.

Akash said...

@the silent observer....i'm glad you got the sarcasm in the poem..and this denial is mostly from the "captain"s of our society...btw ..thanks for dropping by and checking out the blog...

Trisha said...

anytime..always enjoy reading good posts. :)

Thanks for following btw.