Pic. Courtesy: InternetOne crystal drops from the eyes..
one last flower droops and dies...
one more truth and lots of lies..
"You're ain't lost..say Goodbye..!!!"
I beg to differ, as fate kneels down..
I look at life, no smiles..all frown..
I try to laugh..i look like clown...
"You ain't lost...just go and drown!!!"
Shattered glasses cut me deep..
Shattered dreams steals my sleep...
Shattered hopes..makes me creep...
"You ain't lost....in this heap!!!!"...
5 whispers that i heard....:
Hmm...what to say. I found this poem extremely pessimistic but it has a nice poetic image to it. Strangely the negativity of the poem does not drag the reader down with it.. It's nice actually. I like it. :)
thats very deep and somewhat dark write... the first two lines are stunning... touching poem...
@the silent observer....the main purpose was to portray certain dark emotions which often overwhelms our happiness...keeping the reader aloof of every emotion *sigh*....From your comment...i can see..my purpose is served!!!! :-)
@Rajlakshmi...subject of most of my posts have been dark ...i'm too happy in my real life...to write happy stuffs...some deep thing manifests itself through these posts...i'm glad you liked it....
its good n its true... hits hard... i specially like the second paragraph :
"I beg to differ, as fate kneels down..
I look at life, no smiles..all frown..
I try to laugh..i look like clown..."
.... awesome! :)
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